mantou0068 发表于 2022-8-23 11:22   全显示 1楼
终于有续写了，原本也是一部很经典的文章，人物环境描写都很有风格，续写的感觉也很不错，尤其对女主女二的描写，女主方面作者可以多些想法的，不一定按照原来作者思路给和尚，可以多点其他角色的创作，也不一定要全绿的，或者可以半绿，还有白姨也是很吸引人的，后面出现场次变少了，也可以多真加一些的。
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